As we come to the end of this intense month of writing, I’ve been thinking about my sources of strength. I was blessed to grow up near both of my grandmothers. And while I spent much more time with my maternal grandmother, my father’s mother was also a strong role model. Then there is my mother. She was a registered nurse who worked in the operating room of the local hospital her entire adult life until she retired. She always (and still does) put the needs of her family above her own, from staying at the hospital during blizzards to taking extra call when my sister and I were in college. This poem is in honor of these special women, and millions more unsung heroes around the world.
Strong women taught me
how to knit, to bake,
to cook and sew.
Strong women taught me
how to love, to live
through strife and woe.
Strong women taught me
not to count
on others for my bread.
Strong women taught me
to rely
on my own wits instead.
Strong women taught me
to be brave when lies
and hate are spread.
Strong women taught me
how to think, to stand
for what is right.
Strong women taught me
to be kind, to fill
the world with light.
© Catherine Flynn, 2017
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Love the anaphora, the feeling, and where you end up! I got chills.
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Love the repetition and rhyme, and most of all, the message!
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Love this! I too was surrounded and raised by strong women. Life lessons! You should write more about them.
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Catherine! That is a beauty.
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A wonderful tribute to those marvelous women! Good job!
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Catherine, this poem is beautiful and powerful. The repetition and the rhyme work together and create a lovely piece of work.
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Amazing poem! Thank you for sharing!
You’re so lucky to have these strong women in your life.
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I shared your poem with other strong women – it’s simply perfect. You are truly a gifted writer and poet.
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Thank you, Laurie.
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I believe we are very fortunate to have these women in our lives and wish it could be for everyone. I love the brevity and rhyme, exactly said of what’s important. And the arc of the poem is good, too.
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What a wonderful tribute to the strong women in your life!
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Stopped by on my way to Poetry Friday. Love this tribute to strong women!
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I love how this poem evolved. The repeated line strengthens each stanza. I missed this post somehow. It was hiding in my inbox.
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[…] The theme of this year’s celebration is #BalanceforBetter. In 2017, I wrote this poem celebrating the women in my life who helped me be a better person. (You can read the original post here.) […]
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